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Damn You--for your eyes
How they trip me like a wire
Deep as sea bed and grey as London Fog

Damn you--for your smile
How it lifts me like a wind
Radiant as sunrise, swaying like a current

Damn you--for your hands
How they soothe me like a child
Warm as bathwater, the sweetest nectar

Damn you--for your lips
How they melt me like the spring
Whispers of rebirth land soft upon my cheek

Damn you--for your mind
How it dwarfs me in its girth
Sharp as a talon, precise like a hunt

And damn your little quirks
How I giggle like a girl
Playful as a colt and honest as cold rain

Damn you

For letting me fall--
deep into desire
I drop

Damn you--

For giving me this--
an awakening
a consumption

Damn you

For being so damnable
I would drink your arsenic
with bright, smiling eyes

Damn you
Damn you
Damn you
©2006-2009 ~munichmannequins
:iconmunichmannequins:

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january 06

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:iconzcangel:
I like your imagert too. You got the point across. Anger and regret...

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Copyright 1998-2007
z.c. angel
:iconmunichmannequins:
Hey thanks. Anger and regret wasn't exactly what I was going for...more like sort of a spiteful admiration. The good kind of spiteful, like when you're so taken with someone and you realize they have this power over you, and it makes you feel vulnerable.
:icon3amtransition:
I like how you made "damn you" sound so... sweet. & appealing.

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:peace: "And freedom yells, it don't cry, whatever sells will decide. But there's no hell when you die, so don't look so worried"
:iconredlady1610:
I've never seen the use of damn you in this nature. It makes me smile because I know exactly what you mean:giggle: again, great mental visual. I especially like the line:
"And damn your little quirks
How I giggle like a girl
Playful as a colt and honest as cold rain

Cause I can relate to this more and more

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Life needs a control z
:iconmunichmannequins:
thank you very much :)

--
I'm not a woman, I'm a force of Nature
- Courtney Love
Nature is a whore.
- Kurt Cobain

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